October 1997
Sailormoon Ultimate
URL: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Garden/2851/
Creator: Will
Discovered by: Whiz Kid
Overall rating: 1.5 Pans.
This page,
per the description of the Ugly rating, has potential, but the design
is messed up! When I viewed the page, there was this weird text wrap
occuring where the sentences would start on the right side of the page,
and the end of the sentence would get plopped way over on the left.
Narrow the display size, some people still have small screens! You don't
need huge links back to the index either, but a little one is fine.
Like our little "Back to index" link! The content shows potential
though! I liked the poll questions, though some of them were very
interesting! With some re-designing, this page could turn out to be
one of the better ones.
As Mako-chan
mentioned, PLEASE remember those of us with small displays! That text
wrap thing was MESSED UP! The page would look better if you took the
border off the transparent gifs you use as links. The big square around
it just looks SLOPPY! AND there were some broken links! Be sure to TEST
them ALL out when you update! But I agree, this page has potential to be
good! KEEP WORKING AT IT!!
This looks
like the usual page from an inexperienced webmaster. The index keeps
on scrolling and scrolling... (Is that the Energizer bunny in the
distance? HA!) Some of the backgrounds also make the text hard to read.
It's not as bad as some web pages however, because this problem could
probably be fixed by just lightening or darkening the text color. It's
just not a very exciting page! :( If you're looking for pics to use,
then you might want to find an FTP download site, there are plenty around,
and the pic are generally free for all to use.
This page is
kind of blah and messed UP! I can't read the text, because the backgrounds
are so "BUSY"!!! You should try to find a background that is mostly one
color, so text will show up better! There are broken pics too! The page
says that none of the pics are YOURS, but it you're allowed to USE them,
then upload them to YOUR server! That way if pages go down, you will
still HAVE the picture for your page! Just some cleaning up and this
page would be OK.